Girls, just want to have fun.
Carey
froze in the act of turning the knob. Where in the world had he heard those words
before? And why should it send shivers through his spine as if his body had
just been plugged into a wall socket? He tried to shake the sensation that
seemed to be holding him in temporary paralysis. Does the name Cyndi Lauper ring your bell? His thought seemed to
ask him. Of course, the female pop singer had a hit which went by the title. Carey
reckoned that wasn’t grounds to set a man’s nerves on edge.
Girls, just want to have fun, the
parakeet repeated. Something is not right
about that song, Carey thought and slipped out the door heading for work.
By
the time he returned in the evening, Carey had forgotten all about the words of
his parrot. But, as he stepped across the threshold the scent of Rebelle hit him like the return of a
painful memory or like the fragrance
coming off a rotting corpse. Carey never used the perfume, couldn't. It was for
women. Somebody broke into my house while
I was away. His lips tightened into a thin line.
Carey
searched the entire structure for an intruder and found nobody. He checked to see if something had been stolen or broken. Nothing.
What the hell was he looking for? He asked
himself. Carey’s house was a little out of the way and stood on an expansive
stretch of lawn.
Girls, just want to have fun. The parakeet’s
words threw a jump into him. What in the world was wrong with girls having fun? He knew he had nothing
against that. And yet something didn’t feel right.
Caution kept tugging at the heartstrings of his survival instincts. It was
almost like a fire siren going off on his insides. Red Alert! Red Alert! Red Alert! That perfume . . . Rebelle. Where had he come across it? Was
it even important if he recalled the personality who used it back then? Was it
a former girlfriend of his?
Carey
got rid of the day’s clothes and after a hot shower, he sat in front of his TV
to watch the soaps. A Breaking News was running. Two convicts
had escaped from the federal maximum security facility. One had been caught,
the other, a woman was still at large. She was last seen heading west in a black
Honda Element-stolen, of course. Her name is . . .
He
had heard enough. And the feeling had finally come home, full circle.
“Carrie,” he said, and shivered like he had the
shakes.
The
scent of Rebelle at that moment was
cloying. Then, as if in reply to his calls, Carey heard footfalls muffled by the
rug covering coming down the stairs. He didn’t have to wonder who the feet
belonged to. At one time, they had been partners who hacked high-security main
frames and stole chips containing confidential info only to resell them to high
tech companies at huge prices.
The
last time she was here they had been in the sitting room on the same sofa Carey
now occupied. The DVD was playing an old school by the pop artist, Cyndi
Lauper. The parakeet had been hers and she was always saying those words that had
been bugging Carey for some time now to it. The parakeet had not spoken those
words for the past ten years since his former partner had been jailed. Carey had
betrayed her to the cops when his cover was almost blown. And now she had
escaped. And she was back.
“Payback’s a bitch,” Carrie said.
Girls, just want to have fun, the
parakeet said.
Notes to myself:
Flesh out this story in the
rewrite.
Does Carrie need a longer
backstory?
Is there need to go into details
about the heist that got Carrie jailed and turned Carey into a betrayer?
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